Welcome back to the Words of Radiance Reread on Tor.com! Last week, Adolin held his temper with Sadeas but nearly lost his cool over a new Stormwatch warning. This week, he takes over another of Dalinar’s roles as he goes out to meet with Eshonai about the proposed Parshendi surrender.
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Chapter 51: Heirs
Point of View: Adolin
Setting: the Shattered Plains
Symbology: Duelist, Chach, Ishar
IN WHICH Adolin makes Decisions; an Expotition is Planned; Adolin wins an Argument; as a result, he rides out on his father’s horse, wearing his brother’s armor; he and his escort meet Eshonai and her escort, with uneasiness on both sides; Adolin takes a scribe with him to speak with Eshonai between the two groups; pretending to be Dalinar, he opens by suggesting that they discuss her surrender; she seems much different than last time they met, and no longer wishes to parley; she tells him that there will be peace when one side is dead; Adolin returns to the warcamp to find Dalinar already planning a different, much larger Expotition—one which will take the battle to the Parshendi and an ending.
Quote of the Week
“Father!” Adolin snapped. “This is not subject to discussion!”
The room fell silent. Dalinar lowered his hand from the map. Adolin stuck out his jaw, meeting his father’s eyes. Storms, it was difficult to deny Dalinar Kholin. Did his father realize the presence he had, the way he moved people about by sheer force of expectation?
Nobody contradicted him. Dalinar did what he wanted. Fortunately, these days those motives had a noble purpose. But in many ways he was the same man he had been twenty years ago, when he’d conquered a kingdom. He was the Blackthorn, and he got what he wanted.
Except today.
This rather gives me the shivers. Especially followed, as it is, by Adolin’s argument that the kingdom cannot survive without Dalinar. Anyone else, but not Dalinar, with his visions and his leadership. Dalinar is correct in saying that the kingdom should be able to stand the loss of any one man, but Adolin is right when he points out that Alethkar is just not there yet. And Adolin, supported by Kaladin, wins the debate.
Commentary
First of all, greetings from Sasquan, the 73rd World Science Fiction Convention! I’m here, and if you’re here, please find me!! (I’ll be at Registration all morning, every morning… except I’m hoping to duck out early on Friday for the Writing Excuses podcast. I will also be at as many of Brandon’s events as I can swing.)
Now back to our regularly scheduled programming, which today involves some heavy-duty foreboding. There’s a perky bit at the beginning, when Adolin has made his decision not to worry about Dalinar’s “disconcerting behavior” during highstorms; since it’s all a package deal, and he’s already concluded that his father’s sanity is just fine, there’s really nothing else to do, and so he pragmatically moves past it.
From there, it goes steadily downhill. The worry about the assassin’s return is always hovering; the worry about Dalinar’s survival is stepped up by the emphasis on how much they need him; everything feels weird about Adolin’s departure to me, but to him it centers around the difference between riding his father’s Ryshadium and his own.
Gallant was a large black animal, bulkier and squatter than Sureblood, Adolin’s horse. Gallant looked like a warhorse even when compared to other Ryshadium. So far as Adolin knew, no man had ever ridden him but Dalinar. Ryshadium were finicky that way. It had taken a lengthy explanation from Dalinar to even get the horse to allow Adolin to hold the reins, let alone climb into the saddle.
It had eventually worked, but Adolin wouldn’t dare ride Gallant into battle; he was pretty sure the beast would throw him off and run away, looking to protect Dalinar. It did feel odd climbing on a horse that wasn’t Sureblood. He kept expecting Gallant to move differently than he did, turn his head at the wrong times. When Adolin patted his neck, the horse’s mane felt off to him in ways he couldn’t explain. He and his Ryshadium were more than simply rider and horse, and he found himself oddly melancholy to be out on a ride without Sureblood.
I’m… not even going to say any more about that. It makes me very sad.
Then things get even more ominous, as Eshonai pretty much repudiates everything she had said earlier to set up this meeting, and further states that it will be over when one side is dead, because they’ve just changed the rules. As Adolin tries to get more understanding of the situation, there’s this:
“King Gavilar,” Eshonai said, as if mulling over the name. “He should not have revealed his plans to us that night. Poor fool. He did not know. He bragged, thinking we would welcome the return of our gods.”
What was Gavilar planning? And how much did he unleash without their knowledge?
These are my burning questions, and I don’t know how many books we’ll have to wait to get the answers.
Perhaps most chilling of all, when Adolin finally reaches the warcamp after this abortive negotiation, Dalinar is well into a plan to assault the Parshendi—too well into it for this to be a new idea. He’s clearly been working on it for some time, and now that they have the negative response from Eshonai, he’s working out the details with his generals. There’s going to be a real war soon, and it’s going to put them out in the middle of the Shattered Plains just as the countdown finishes.
Stormwatch
Thirty-one days to go; this takes place on the day after the highstorm of the previous chapter.
All Creatures Shelled and Feathered
Perhaps I should have held the quote about Sureblood and Gallant for this section, but it belonged up there. Here, I shall merely point out that the Ryshadium are definitely not mere horses. Aside from their stature, they’re connected with their riders in a way we clearly don’t understand yet. To quote Brandon (or paraphrase?), “Investiture is involved.” We just don’t know how.
Heraldic Symbolism
So here we stand with Chach and Ishar for a chapter that primarily involves Adolin and Dalinar. This combination was so frequent in TWoK that I was convinced Adolin would be a Dustbringer. For a more obvious association, though, once again Adolin is guarding his father and Dalinar is guiding his nation.
I’m not entirely sure what “Heirs” references; the word is not used in the chapter. On a guess, it may be Adolin as Dalinar’s heir (both literally, and in the sense of him taking Dalinar’s place in leading the Kholin armies) and Eshonai as being the heir of all that the Parshendi once were (in the worst possible way, now). Please discuss!
Words of Radiants
In short, if any presume Kazilah to be innocent, you must look at the facts and deny them in their entirety; to say that the Radiants were destitute of integrity for this execution of one their own, one who had obviously fraternized with the unwholesome elements, indicates the most slothful of reasoning; for the enemy’s baleful influence demanded vigilance on all occasions, of war and of peace.
—From Words of Radiance, chapter 32, page 17
Well. That just raises a whole boatload of questions. Who was Kazilah? Who/what was he fraternizing with? Why did they execute him? How? We can only speculate, of course, but I find myself assuming that this is related to the “wicked thing of eminence” again.
With regard to things I didn’t address but should have… would someone go do all the research on Teleb and the Oldblood? There are several other worthy topics as well, but y’all will have to go read the chapter to dig them out. I’m wiped.
For what it’s worth, I won’t be joining in on the discussion until much later tonight; by the time this posts, I’ll be at my station over in the Convention Center, and the programming really picks up tomorrow. I hope I make it back in time to get some sleep…
Alice Arneson is a long-time Tor.com commenter and Sanderson beta-reader. Also, SASQUAN!
Alice, I love the Winnie the Pooh reference (although I admit that I had to Google it first). Other than that, I have noting to add.
Thanks for reading my musings.
AndrewHB
aka the musespren
My interpretation of the chapter title, Heirs, is that Adolin is both Dalinar and the Blackthorn heir. The Kholins generals respect Adolin because he is a nice capable kid and their Highprince’s heir, but in this scene, he stepped up in a confrontation we learned has not happened very often. As a result, the room grows silent. Adolin wonders if Dalinar realizes the presence he had and the brute force by which he makes people move. We could send back the question and ask: “Does Adolin realize he has the same strength in him?”.
So yes, he is the rightful heir to the dreaded Blackthorn. He possess the same energy, the same presence, the same aura, but he does not know how to use it, yet. The difference? Young Dalinar was driven by anger and jealousy; young Adolin is driven by love and deep care for his family, but both man have the same energy signature. I had wonder how this would play in the future and if Adolin would someday earn himself a worthy nickname.
For the rest, Sureblood. Sad. Too sad. I hope Adolin will find himself another Rhysadium. The departure felt of for me too. I expected the meeting to go wrong, but it didn’t. It did, in a way, but I expected a physical confrontation. It did not happen. I also took note Adolin has to lower his voice tone to try to sound like his father. That was strange to me: Dalinar has a much graver voice than his son. It was unexpected.
I shall also take note of Adolin’s spine which crawls over the thought of being in the Plains at the end of the countdown. Another note of his growing unease and a foreteller of his meltdown at the end? Already, he is not liking it and by the end of the book, he is clearly unsettled.
Regrets? We had the Jasnah’s bath scene, the Shallan’s bath scene, why didn’t we get the Adolin one? The chapter starts after he is done…. Disappointement. Are we forever doom to solely read about female bathing scenes? To which makes me wonder how many hours they sleep at night… Coming home late, overseeing the cleaning of the room, sleep, get up early enough to take a long bath… I have to wonder if Adolin is actually getting enough sleep here: he can’t rely on stormlight to keep himself going.
On the very, very side note, I heard Brandon was going to do a reading at Spokane. I am keen to hear all about it.
@Gepeto – yes you’re right!!! Where is Adolin’s bath scene. That is so unfair that they guys get Shallan and Jasnah’s bath scenes. But we don’t get Adolin’s!!!
I still have comments. But I just had to comment on the bath scene. Am in the middle of something right now. Will write longer comment later. :-)
@Alice – thanks again for the re-read. And enjoy the SAQUAN.
Alice great post as usual, hope you have a wonderful time at the conference. Is it too much to ask for you to update us on any new WOB or cosmere related stuff that may come up during the conference?
Gepeto, loved what you said about Adolin having same strength as his father, he just needs to learn to apply it.
I think the Rhyshadium are awesome and Ihope we get to learn more about them in future books.
RIP Sureblood
So, not to derail the conversation so soon, but Sureblood is making me think of this now. What if, in the next book, Adolin does get exiled, but winds up traveling to the Ryshadium fields. After losing Sureblood, finding out that his love is a Radiant along with his brother, father, and Kaladin, killing Sadeas, being exiled would most likely be one of the final straws that “breaks” him wide open, ready for attracting a Spren. But what if, for him, that can only happen with a Ryshadium? We know, investiture is involved with that attraction, so what if, like Skyeels and greatshells, spren are attracted to these horses as well?
Sorry for the rambling post, but that’s my line of thought and I needed to get it down as fast as I could before losing it all. Please flesh this out or tear it apart at your leisure!
Props to Adolin for taking a leadership role!!
Sureblood is still amongst the living, but yeah. I want to know more about those super horses. Interesting thought, dashardie @5. This whole deal with Adolin’s dead-spren Edgedancer blade, him currently seeming to have Edgedancer attributes (or weakly Willshaper?), going off the reservation by killing Sadeas, possibly being broken as a result, and the eventual loss of Sureblood has a long way to play out. I want to see him come back in a strong leadership role and I believe he will.
Oldbloods are a dynasty that previously ruled Alethkar. They wear a blue tattoo on their cheeks to designate membership in the clan. They aren’t a threat to current leadership because they lost control so long ago (per BWS).
Teleb is, of course, an Oldblood and one of Dalinar’s officers. He appeared several times in WoK (suggesting the use of man-carried bridges to reach assault plateaus, but not to cross to battlefield plateaus). He is a shardbearer and will succumb in the Battle of Narak, where Captain Khal recovers his blade.
And this:
Two things bother me about Eshonai’s statement. First, what Alice brought up about Gavilar’s plans and how much had been set in motion already. From what Eshonai says, I get the feeling Gavilar spoke about reviving the Knights by bringing back the Voidbringers. YMMV. Where did Gavilar learn about such things? I wouldn’t think Jasnah had put it together so long ago, let alone discussed it with dad. Maybe Mr. T? Feel like I’m missing something important here.
But then there’s the part about Gavilar revealing his plans that night. What night? The implication is that it was the night he was assassinated, which can’t be correct because the Parshendi couldn’t have put Szeth into play so quickly, IMHO. I could be wrong about that, but I think Eshonai is referring to a different night. Oh, to have been a fly-on-the-wall for that pow-wow.
@@.-@: It is very interesting to compare Adolin to Dalinar: they are both so similar in some ways and yet so different in others…
@5: I doubt a Rhysadium is required to form a Nahel bond, but I yearn for him to bond another one.
@6: I adore Adolin when he is assuming his role as future Highprince: it makes the strategic tactical cold headed Adolin shine, the one who strangely is in his element and cannot be bested.
I have always been somewhat amused to read so many people state Kaladin would soon assume the role of either a Highprince and/or a prominent war leader simply by virtue of him being a Windrunner whose second attribute happens to be leadership. Leadership can be applied in so many different ways and Kaladin’s strength seem to lie with being a motivator and an inspiration, but he has not demonstrated strong tactical skills for large scale battles or potential as a politician.
And yes, I do want to see Adolin finding his voice, his path and his strength which is so reminiscent of the Blackthorn yet so different.
The idea of Adolin bonding another Ryshadyium makes me think of the Pern books and the attempt to get Brekke to bond another dragon. Bad idea.
Double post. The second time in a row my kindle has done that.
Why? Why is Brandon always murdering innocent–and awesome–horses?! Equicide is not cool (Is equicide an official word? If not it totally should be. I’m making it a word now). Gallant had better live to ripe old age dammit.
The scene between Adolin and Dalinar did change my mind about something that we have all debated about before–Adolin’s level of education or lack thereof.
I still think Vorin ideals and gender segregationist are filthy, disgusting and generally STUPID. But I actually think men must receive a similar level of formal education to women, just in different subjects.
t seems fairly obvious to me that while only women study literacy and some forms of science, both obviously learn at least some math–(Storm wardens, Shallan’s brother, and her thought in WoK that men are expected set prices in stores while women do the bookkeeping).
History and Philosophy do not seem to be entirely limited to women either. However, men still must rely upon a woman to read them the books and are kept ignorant of the subtexts.
Given what a terrible job Elhokar’s wife has done ruling Kholinar in his absence, and the fact Navani is either OK with the terrible job she was doing or blatantly lying to both her son the King and Dalinar, one has to wonder what giant gaps have to exist in women’s education as well.
Adolin, Dalinar, Elhokar and all the other Alethi noblemen had to have some formal education in law, history, warfare, diplomacy as a subset of psychology and economics if they are supposed to be in charge of their realms. I’m guessing many of those lessons may actually be forbidden to women outside the ardentia.
Vorinism disgusts me. Have I mentioned that lately?
^^Equicide sounds good.
And…Bela. Lives. (As a Hero of the Horn, I’m convinced.)
Hey, y’all. Popping for a quick hello and update.
Today I had the fun of meeting several people I’ve only known on line, and one whose name I just completely blanked who is following the reading but not commenting. Man, I feel awful about that; names keep slipping my mind lately. But it was fun to chat, anyway!! And you need to at least pop in and say hi, and tell me your name again!!!!!! (Oy. eyeroll for my brain.)
Brandon gave a reading this afternoon, from one of Dalinar’s flashbacks, set about 30 years ago. It was… most interesting. I’m afraid I can’t say any more until after the October tour, because he wants to use some of the same material and doesn’t want it leaked.
I recorded the Q&A; I don’t recall any new Cosmere stuff, but I’ll listen to it again in the next couple of days and see if there’s anything to report back on.
Also: Team Sanderson is awesome. There was a major-fan-girl in the reading today with her little guy, maybe 6-8 months old, who unfortunately decided he didn’t like Dalinar or something. She did her best to quiet him, but he wasn’t having any of it and started crying. As she was trying to collect everything so she could take him out, someone from the other side of the room asked loudly, “Can you take the baby out, please!” (I’m telling myself that he couldn’t see that she was trying to…) Brandon simply told her not to worry, he has three little guys of his own and knows what it’s like, but needless to say she was in tears by the time she got out of the room. Peter calmly stood up with a copy of Brandon’s new Con Special Double, followed her out, and gave it to her. I wanted to cheer.
Dalinar’s flashback 30 years ago???? That’s about the time where he bonded Oathbringer… OMG and you can’t tell us a thing??? This is so terrible for those who are cursed to never attend those conventions :-(
I feel so depressed.
You are all so lucky. Have a good time there. I hope some will ask character related questions… we so seldom get any.
As for the guy who yelled after the poor woman, had I been there, needless to say the whole room would have heard what I thought of his behavior. Cheers to Peter and Brandon.
@12 Yes, Bela lives! For a horse, Bela has a lot of screen time in The Wheel of Time. :-)
@Alice – A Dalinar flashback! You just inspired me to attend Brandon’s book signing in Houston this October. I really need to attend it now! Also – any plans for a re-read of Warbreaker? Or has it been done already?
@11 You are right. The men has formal education, except that in Vorin culture, “reading” is a woman’s thing like playing Barbie. But from what I have read so far, men can count. They know their currency. They just don’t know how to write it down. So, men know basic math at least.
But, I believe they know more than that. They lead armies. So that means they have to know geometry and cartography at least so that they can read maps. They also know how many days march to reach a place. So, they know. They just cannot write it down.
Perhaps, it is our point of view. I cannot imagine myself not being able to read and write. But if we go back 100 years, in the early part of the 20th century, many men and women cannot read and write but they lead very productive lives. They know how to add, the can make change, they recognize money.
I believe that Brandon just exchanged roles for men and women in the Stormlight Archive. In Warbreaker, which is part of the cosmere, where Hoid made a cameo appearance and of course Vasher (Zahel in WoR), men and women can read and write. And Vasher was a scholar in Warbreaker. In fact, he invented and discovered so many things.
Then again, we are back to how frustrating Vorin culture is. :-)
Gepeto @14 – I’m sure it will go online somewhere once the Shadows of Self tour is over. (I’m assuming that everyone will abide by his request to keep it offline until then, but you never know. Some people just don’t care.) If no one else does, I’ll transcribe and post it somewhere… but I’m betting there are 17th Shard people who will have it all transcribed with their finger on the button to post it as soon as he’s likely to be done with the reading at his last stop!
sheiglagh @15 – Warbreaker reread… I’m hoping to do that in between the conclusion of the WoR reread and the publication of SA3. I might choose to make it move a little faster than this one, to be sure it’s finished in time, but it’s something I really want to do.
@11 and 16: I do not think the men have much formal education. However, we know Adolin had a tutor as a child, ardent Kadash, who taught him the history of Roshar among other things… Adolin claimed he never had a mind for history not directly relating to battles. It does appear to me he was taught Vorinism and history according to the religion with an emphasis on combat, but little eager Adolin probably thought most of it was boring. Though, I try to envision how such lessons must have been conducted: ardent Kadash speaking and young Adolin trying to remember some of it… Oral teaching is one of the worst way to teach: most people need reading to recall anything. I personally am nearly unable to learn anything via hearing only, so it is not really surprising Adolin does not recall much.
Which makes me think the Alethi males are probably very good at remembering things they are told….
Adolin also knows his numbers and understand percentages (fractions), which implies a grade 4-6 level of mathematical abilities, probably the highest you can go without being able to write/read.
For the rest, it seems to me as most of their teaching is informal… Dalinar states how Adolin is much more prepare then he had been to assume the role of Highprince and how he worked hard to make sure he would be. In other words, Dalinar has been informally teaching his son for years. It seems to me most of Adolin knowledge in terms of strategy, card reading, military tactics must come from Dalinar. He is the one who oversaw his son’s tutoring in the matter of soldering.
That being said, I recall it mentioned, in WoK, how young women and men could come to the ardentia for lessons… I think it is Adolin who reflects on that when he visits ardent Kadash. I bet Renarin was one of those who attend regularly, but not Adolin.
In other words, they seem to have teaching of sorts, but it does not seem well established. It is clear Adolin had receive education, but not a very detailled or throughout one. Most of what he knows, I’d wager, he accumulated through his personal experiences. He was probably taught how to read glyphs as well, so his inability in the matter is still puzzling… though to refer to my earliest comment, how are you supposed to learn glyphs if you can’t trace them? And how was he taugh exactly? With ardent Kadash holding a card from up front and telling him about it? Again, the most inefficient way of teaching… Adolin spends all his leisure time with his nose into his fashion magazines which are filled with glyphs: it is strange if he can’t read any of it.
Come to think of it, the one time he couldn’t read it, how far was he standing from Navani and how small were those glyphs? He couldn’t tell if there were two… I am unsure there was not something else at the work here other than a young uninterested in glyphs prince. It does not make sense he would have learned none of it, unless his teaching had been very poor. Especially since Adolin seeems rather receptive to teaching in other occasions. My thoughts are he struggled with them for reasons and ended up giving up learning while claiming it was because he had no interest…
@17: Actually no, the 17th Shard people are being very respectful of Brandon’s wishes for the chapter to not be disclosed until the end of the tour. After that, it will certainly go online with a video and a transcript. Until then, if someone is ever as bold as to post it nonetheless, I believe the admins would promtly remove it. The one time I saw a preview chapter leaked there, it was a more ambiguous situation… it had not been clear the chapter had to remain secret.
Strangely enough, no words (WoB) from the Spokane convention has gone into the 17th Shard yet. I believe not many of them were attempting.
@18 Gepeto, I am a working scientist, not a teacher (my wife has been a very successful one). However, I recognize and have been taught by my wife that children have different preferred learning modes. Some are visual, others are aural, and still others are tactile learners. That doesn’t mean that children can’t learn other than in their preferred mode. Surely you remember things you only heard, despite being a visual learner. More importantly, when teaching is done only or predominantly in an aural mode (the predominant mode on this planet prior to the printed page), children manage to learn that way. Adolin’s current limitations in this regard should then be ascribed to lack of sufficient interest as well as to the foibles of Alethi culture. In this, however, he is not so different than Kaladin. Both were conditioned by their fathers to pursue the paternal career. In Kaladin’s case, it was surgery that required the ability to read glyphs as well as memorizing body parts, illnesses, and treatments. In Adolin’s case, it was the ability to wage and lead battles. Both have the ability to quickly read and assess a battle scene and to take appropriate action.
@17 Alice! You are a goddess :-) Thank you!!! I love Warbreaker. Siri and the God King are so cute together. I’m also glad that Brandon finally has plans on writing a sequel if my info is correct.
@19 Thank you for your inputs. I am familiar with the diverse learning preferences. I would however add auditory children are the less common type (about 10%), the most common being kinesthesic (about 50%) closely followed by visual (about 40%). In other words, the vast majority of children do not assimilate their lessons well by auditory means only. It is thus not surprising the Alethi men appear uneducated on average. I doubt Adolin is an exception: he seems to be a predominantly visual person. Visual learners tend to do well in mathematics, are good at reading people and emotions which probably fits Adolin better than the other two types. Renarin most likely is a kinesthesic with his tendency to fidget and his interest in how things work. Auditory people tend to do well in languages, oral speaking and music, but are poor at reading. Kinesthesic learn well no matter how they are taught.
I do agree Adolin probably never had much interest in the subjects he was being tutored on by ardent Kadash, but I also think the way he was taught is a strong contributor. Visual children will quickly lose attention in front of a speaking teacher, but will thrive in written exercises. Kaladin, by comparison, may very well be auditory, though I am honestly unsure about him. His capacity to retain so much information by memory without reading it tells me he probably is auditary and the flute… let’s not forget the flute…
Oral teaching still is, to this day, the predominant teaching method. I would however correct your statement in saying most children learn very well this way as it is not true. A substancial number of children do not assimilate their lessons, lag behind at school when they do not end up dropping out… Where I live, a recent study stated 40% of adults were functional analphabets, meaning they had the reading skills of a 4th grader, at most. They can read the words, but they can’t make sense out of them. Despite being traditionally oral, our schooling system still offers many visual aids and supports, such as reading… I would thus not be surprised a schooling method completely devoid of visual support would give extremely poor results.
All that to state, Adolin did prove he had much more going on in his head we previously assumed. Whereas he has been tutored in his childhood, I do believe the way he was taught prevented him from learning much more than the weak basis. His other learnings, those he is good at, all imply direct first hand experience or visual support as well as, you are absolutely right, strong incentive from his father.
That being said, had anyone notice the only male character we see handling books in a regular manner is Adolin? We never see “learned” Renarin or Dalinar bother with one, but Adolin carries his around. Alright. Sure, it’s about fashion. Quite silly, but it is a book. I had always wonder why Brandon make Adolin the jock read so much…
@21 Gepeto, I don’t if we really differ in educational philosophy. A good teacher teaches in all modes in order to gain the attention of students regardless of their preferred learning mode. Normally, even those teachers most attuned to verbal transmission of information will still use the ‘blackboard’ (or smartboard) for reinforcement and will encourage students to take notes and will provide them with written exercises to do in class and at home. A strictly verbal teaching scheme could be boring for some or many students without reinforcement such as good grades and compliments. In the ‘good’ old days, that reinforcement was often corporal punishment. My point was that in a culture and times where verbal teaching was the only acceptable or practical mode, good students managed to absorb the orally transmitted information.
Your may well be correct in your assumptions about the preferred modes of learning of Renarin (kinesthetic) and Kaladin (aural). I should add that Shallan is clearly a visual learner. As to Adolin’s alleged book interest, that is not really warranted since the book he carries is a picture book – he’s not reading. Perhaps, though, it’s a sign of a frustrated student who was never given the opportunity to learn to read. Shallan, on the other hand, is an avid reader who may ultimately teach Adolin should he discard the strong Alethi prejudice against male reading.
@21 Gepeto – you are right, Adolin is a very visual person. And that I am saying because fashionistas are visual people. Now, for the other comments on learning, I really cannot say anything. I don’t know anything about teaching.
Back to Adolin – yes he always carries a book, albeit about fashion. But it’s because he is very interested. I guess back in Kholinar, before the war, that’s something that the young prince will do – plan his wardrobe. in fact, there was a chapter wherein Adolin said that he used to mix and match clothes regularly and everyday.
That said, Adolin being visual and also being a fashionista, he gives a lot of attention to details. And that is the reason why he is a good commander, a good duelist and a fierce warrior. I don’t have the words to explain it here. It’s Friday and my brain is already fried.
Anyway, let it be said that Adolin being a visual person is a plus for him whether he is a warrior or choose to be a scholar which he really is not much into. That’s also the reason why Shallan and him fit. They complement each other. :-)
@22: I would sincerely be at lost to figure out a “good old time” where the teachers did not use writing/reading as a reinforcement tool to enforce their teachings (that and the good old strap). I mean, reading/writing has been the basis of education since Antiquity: nobles and merchants were taught to read and write. The peasants and the workers, no: their schooling was either non-existent of that of an apprentice: very different things.
That being said, there once were non writing communities were knowledge was passed down through oral tradition, but they did not have extensive higher learning… Europeans, Arabs all had writing to support their teachings since… many, many, many centuries. Only a minority were taught, but their schooling was not solely oral.
School did not become mainstream until… gee, I would be at lost to figure out when but let’s say 19th century. Even then, teaching was done on a blackboard with students being required to write things down… Strictly oral teaching did not exist, not in the form the Alethi seem to be pursuing with their boys. That being said, providing such a system, the only ones who would do well would be the minority of auditory children and some of the kinesthesic, both having interested in studies. Visual children never stood a chance.
I agree Shallan probably is a visual learner, but being a woman, she had the luxury of being able to read. She is mostly self-taught which is common with visual learners. Since they do not need someone to tell them the lesson and they prefer to read it, many will simply take the text book home and forget about the class. Had Shallan been put through the same learning experience as Adolin, it’s probable she would have done poorly.
Yes sure, he carries a picture book… the only kind of book available to men, but this is how reading starts… Well, with children that is… You start by showing them picture book, bringing them to find an interest into the idea of looking into a book. At first, you nearly have to hold the page still long enough for you to read the single word on it in order to prevent the baby from throwing it away… but eventually they stop doing it and they start to listen… So Adolin carrying a picture book does indicate an interest in the idea of opening a book and get information from it. In his case, it is pleasure: he likes fashion, he reads (or look) about fashion in a book.
I personally Adolin would come out as much more smarter had he been allowed to learn to read… which makes me think it would be a fun thing to ask Brandon…
Barring sports and arts (too easy), which modern day traditional academic subject would Kaladin, Adolin, Shallan, Renarin and Dalinar excel at? Be terrible at?
Another fun one: Were they allowed to read, what kind of book would Kaladin, Adolin, Renarin and Dalinar prefer? Who reads fantasy?
Would be fun to know the kind of light funny questions which can surprisingly tell us much.
@23: Of course he is interested in fashion, but my point was his instincts is to look it up into a book, for fun. It does not mean much, but I simply pointed out he was the only male character we see doing it. “Learned” Renarin is never seen looking into on of the men’s book…
Yeah, Adolin was a hopeless fop back in his teenage years… I kinda want to read about it… as it seems one of the reasons everyone so readily dismiss him is tightly linked to why many readers still call him a “shallow dumb jerk”. He appears stupid, he plays at being stupid and he looks the part with his obsession on clothes, but he does have much more going on.
There is no such thing as someone who is solely one type of learner. Many of the shortcomings of modern schools can be laid at the feet of overly large class sizes and mass prescribed teaching standards that only include one or at most two methods of learning.
Anyone can learn a primarily auditory lesson in a one on one if the teacher requires multiple recitations of the information back from the student adding some kinetics to the lesson.
People where able to learn and retain vast sums of information even 100 years ago because their brains were wired differently in development based on the types of education they had. My grandparents grew up during the Depression and could do math in their heads that many people would have trouble doing with a graphing calculator today.
Meanwhile I don’t even know many people who have more than one or two phone numbers memorized anymore (something that 20 years ago was a necessity), and there are some young adults and teenagers who have never even used a physical phone book.
On that note, Kaladin may be more of a visual learner than it appears at first blush too. Remember, he actually had hundreds of sketches with glyph pairing descriptions he had to study as an apprentice surgeon.
I’m just going to quote a passage from chapter 14, which I think is relevant to the current discussion:
This was the quote of the week for chapter 14 as well. Now, it’s hard to know how accepted it is for the highest ranking Alethi lighteyed males to be well-versed in glyphs, as Navani is not really the best judge of what is acceptable based on their high-class gender norms (I’m reminded of the glove scene that occurs later on)…but the way Adolin responds it definitely seems like something he saw as purely optional and he willingly didn’t choose to engage in.
For that matter, while he can’t directly read stories himself, as an important lighteyes Adolin could always have someone read to him if he was interested in books – in a way, Alethi men just need to “audiobook” everything where they can. Although there seems to be limits on doing so for decorum – at least, it wasn’t hard for Sadeas to spin it that Dalinar constantly listening to a book was a sign he was losing it.
I think what throws us off when it comes to the matter of Adolin’s education is that we haven’t seen any of it except for the stuff that is pretty redundant to see, i.e. hearing about his sword training and other martial education Adolin received. This is about all we’ve seen of male lighteyes education: we’ve seen plenty of what the female lighteyes can study, which we feel more comfortable with because it more closely mirrors what we see as general education. We’ve also seen a fair amount of what darkeyed children get for education: it’s mostly profession-focused, which we see with L’il Kal’s more extraordinary example and all the more mundane ones of his fellow villagers and Tien. We have no idea what darkeyed girls can get for education but then that’s one of those holes in our coverage of the Alethi: we have to basically rely on what Tyn taught Shallan, which as we’ve seen was heavily biased information to what would help a con artist.
For my 2 cents, I think Adolin might be the most educated member of the main Stormlight cast (well, the main POV 4) – it’s just what his culture considers education doesn’t really align with what we think of as education, and Adolin seems to be maybe the least driven when it comes to educational pursuits (or maybe it’s more Shallan and Jasnah really skew the scale with their intense studying). Shallan is largely self-taught, while Kaladin’s education was specialized towards the surgical profession. Dalinar it’s hard to say, but I’m making the assumption that Adolin would have been better off for educational resources than Dalinar considering the Unification of Alethkar.
Learning is only focused on literacy if you restrict yourself to western culture. In many illiterate cultures most people have extensive botanic knowledge, and cultural knowledge is taught in songs and stories.
@26: I guess the discussion pertaining reading glyphs relates to why Adolin did not think it interesting enough to disengage in his learning? As a prince, it is obvious he was taught. Navani assumes he should have known those glyphs, but he doesn’t. Worst, he can’t tell if there is one or two glyphs on the tiny piece of paper she is holding.
For someone who spends his leisure time nose stick into his fashion magazines, not being able to read glyphs is…. strange. I mean, surely he wondered what was written in those… which leads me to ask how was he taught?
The questions are thus: Did Adolin refuse to learn glyph by pure disinterest on his part or was it something else? In order words, did he actually try to learn them, but dropped out upon being bad at it? Did he give up because he felt he was not smart enough for glyphs and thus claimed he was not interested to hide his difficulties?
I have not come to a valid conclusion here yet. It could be Adolin truly did not care about his own instruction, but it is strange as he does seem to care at other moments and his interest in men’s books kinda contradicts the whole thing… even if they are just about fashion… there are words/glyphs written in them… Or it could be Adolin just struggled to learn due to the way he was taught. In front of these difficulties, he just give up and pretend not to care. There are many reasons why he could have struggled, one being the strictly oral tutoring for a very visual person. As for glyph readings… has anyone ever considered Adolin may have eyesight issues? He can’t see there are two glyphs and glyphs essentially are a bunch of lines interlaced, if he had astigmatism (for instance), he would truly not be able to see them well enough, but it would not impair his everyday life. A completely undetectable issue in a world where men are not required to read small characters on a black board…
Bottom line is, I am unsure if our favorite illiterate jock is such by pure choice or by circumstances. He seems too smart in other occasions to not have gathered how to read glyphs, especially since he was taught.
@27: I am not disputing the fact one can learn by strictly oral means, I am disputing the fact certain people would do horribly poorly at this. For instance, had I been part of an illiterate culture, I would have probably been one of the worst at remembering these plant names, but give me written support and I’d be one of the best…
My whole point is we will never know how good (or bad) of a student Adolin could have been until he is allowed to use visual support to reinforce his schooling. Strictly visual students would do poorly in a strictly oral tutoring environment and Adolin seem to have done rather poorly in his. His potential is thus not attained. Let him read and then we’ll see what he’s really got going in his brain.
@26 I believe you are right. Aside from the obvious (Jasnah being the most highly educated) Adolin must rank high up there in terms of education. Being a member of the royal family, they must have the best tutors that money can buy.
Another point to consider is this – part of Adolin and Renarin’s training as heirs to a princedom and also as heirs to the throne of Alethkar is getting all those reports daily about the troops. True, they might not be able to read the reports but they are told orally. And they retain a lot of that knowledge.
i believe that Alethkar or the Vorin culture sees writing as part of recording events. Males are supposed to do the actions while females are supposed to record.
@Gepeto – I don’t know how fashion books in Alethkar look like but since this is fiction, I believe Brandon meant for the fashion books to be the equivalent of today’s LOOKBOOKS which are basically photos. There are no writings except in the front and only the name of the designer, design house or store (example Neiman Marcus). The only writing in the pages are page numbers which are very tiny. I don’t think Brandon was thinking of Vogue when he put a fashion book in Adolin’s hand. :-) And BTW, I’m saying this with love and not with sarcasm.
I believe that a fashion book is Adolin’s equivalent of an iPhone or an iPad or a Kindle or a smartphone. There is going to be a storm. There is nothing to do but weather it, so he looks at fashion. He has a date with a girl. He does not want to tweedle his thumbs while waiting, so he “reads” a fashion book. I can see today’s 23-year old men doing th same thing except that they use their iPhone. :-)
@everyone – there is something to be said about visual learning. If you have read Warbreaker then you will know hown Zezebron IV learned how to read. :-)
@29: We do not know what is the exact content of Adolin’s fashion books. It has glyphs on the cover page, so it is quite possible there are glyphs inside. At this point in time, we do not know. I would thus refrain from speculating too hard on it. The point is Adolin does look into a book, no matter how irrelevant it is.
@30 But it is not irrelevant. :-) The Alethi are almost like Italians when it comes to fashion. It is part and parcel of their culture. :-) And Adolin is a well-known fashion guru among the Alethi elite. Even Sadeas who does not like him approached Adolin about it, though the compliment was backhanded and has sinister undertones.
The Alethi elite all try to outdo each other when it comes to what they are wearing. Case in point – uncut gems as buttons in Sadeas’ coat? I know this is fiction. Yet, combining real world knowledge with fictional Roshar’s culture, uncut gems as buttons is a bit ostentatious for the average person. In today’s terms, it is like someone wearing a Chanel haute couture gown that costs around 100,000 euros. And they do exist, and yes, real people wear those kinds of clothes.
I don’t see the fashion book as irrelevant. Like what I said,, I see Adolin looking at it the same way a 23-year old male today uses his iPhone. What I’m saying is that the Kholins are in a social class of their own in Alethkar. They are the royal family.
Part of the reason why women “call” on Adolin is because he is an heir to a princedom and third in line to the Alethi throne. He is an important man. An alliance with Adolin is a step-up for any woman, not only in Alethkar but from the whole of Roshar
Even Shallan who grew up in another kingdom and in a rural area at that, has heard of Adolin. She might not have had a school girl crush on Adolin, but like many girls her age who lives in a rural area, meeting a prince is a fanciful dream.
In today’s terms, I can imagine a 13-year old girl from Hoop & Holler Texas population 10 knowing about Prince William and Prince Harry and wistfully thinking of meeting them someday. It’s not an active dream, but it is one of those things. Hey, I even dream of meeting them someday. :-) I will not go out of my way to meet them, but if the chance occur, I’ll take it.
I love Adolin as you know. As a fictional character, I believe it is unfair of us to judge him by our standards, i.e., him not being able to read or write. He comes from a culture wherein reading and writing are considered feminine. In a similar way, our culture, (at least the western culture) we see Barbie as something for women.
In the same token, barriers can be breached. And, in Roshar, the reading and writing POV as only for women is about to be breached with the storm wardens starting to create an alphabet based on glyphs. I don’t know if it will happen in the course of the books, but the scene of Shallan in Amaram’s map room hinted to that.
Like what @26 said, Adolin is not interested in learning to read. Not because he is stupid or uneducated but simply because he does not see a need. He can have someone read to him and when he marries, his wife will take care of those things for him. There is nothing wrong with that if you ask me.
Again, I’m saying this because I love Adolin and I am not trying impugn him as a character. :-)
@31: I think you have misunderstood me… I absolutely do not judge Adolin by our modern day standards, I merely wonder if part of his apparent lack of interest in his “studies” did not derive from the strictly oral means by which teaching is performed with young men. I am also somewhat amused he turns out being the only male character we see carrying a book around… I did not mean to imply he would be interested in reading, there is no evidence of such thing, simply that he likes to go through his fashion mags. You take the IPhone example, I take little children who likes to look at pictures in books… What conclusion to be drawn on this, I do not know. It is an interesting fact.
Bottom line is I want more insight on Adolin so I could get to analyze him better. Perhaps there is nothing there, but perhaps there is. We just do not know.
Adolin and many other males probably don’t bother learning glyphs because they aren’t actual words that can form coherent sentences let alone an actual language (the Storm Wardens are apparently adapting one, but that’s looked at as somewhat perverse by the rest of society).
More importantly it’s mentioned multiple times in texts that the glyph can be highly stylized to the point that the base character is virtually unrecognizable. As much as I love to read, I highly doubt I would bother trying to memorize a bunch of symbols whose meanings can be completely obscured based on whether the drawer likes to make the “.” on top of her metaphorical “i” heart shaped.
@33 Oh no!!! You just wounded the teenager me when I used to sign my name with a heart on the “i” :-) LOL
@34 Sheiglagh
Maybe, but doubtless the teenaged you had impeccable penmanship and did not add so much flare as to render her words unreadable to others. Besides which, the Latin-based alphabet we use combines small symbols to make whole words. A few doodles here and there on the individual letters doesn’t harm the word as much
Glyphs are already whole words so adding swirls and dots and such can more easily make one glyph look like another or, more likely, gibberish.
Think about drawing that single lower case “i” then adding your customary heart to the top. Cute isn’t it? But everyone’s doing that you think to yourself. You want to stand out. You are an artist! So now you add a little curl to the bottom. Maybe make the curl a spiral? Now that “i” is really rockin’ you think to yourself….
Only one problem, I walk up and think “Well that looks cool, but is it an “i” or a “j”? Or a flower with heart shaped petals and a curly leaf at the bottom of the stem?”
See how quickly it can get confusing to anyone who didn’t know the writer’s intent from the get go? And that’s just a line with a dot on top of it. Imagine something like this getting fancied up:
Add a few swirls and dots to that and who knows what you have…
@wcarter: I’d say that’s more an issue though if you’ve been raised with a Romantic language of some kind, because our alphabet is, to put it lightly, pretty utilitarian as languages go. Although glyphs aren’t their own language, each one seems to be its own word, and once you learn them they’d jump out at you because that’s what you’re familiar with – it depends somewhat on your aptitude for reading ability (including educational disorders), but once you set your brain a certain way it’s more likely to pick out on things. It’s true that glyphs aren’t as useful because they lack a proper method of syntax, but just being able to represent single words is exceptionally powerful – that is what starts the process of language development (or did in humans anyways, based on current linguistics). When glyphs come up they seem to serve the role of very basic information dissemination: they’re used in your signs for stores, directions, basic diagrams, etc.
That said, I wonder: for the elite Alethi men, maybe it’s not so much the need to be masculine for why they’d want to avoid even learning glyphs as simple as they are – maybe it has to do with how they see the husband/wife pair as essential for proper life. The Alethi military relies very heavily on the officer/wife pair to cover both the leadership and bureaucratic/information roles of the military, so glyphs being discouraged for that reason makes some sense.
Admittedly I’m biased by the original quote’s context: something about the way Adolin responded to Navani while they were basically alone except for Renarin makes me feel like it’s meant to be more a character moment specifically for Adolin than an indicator for the male Alethi lighteyes in general.
I actually really like what Sanderson did with Vorinism and how he split up literacy – it’s just such an alien way to do so that our minds automatically reject it as wrong. So much of fantasy and science fiction will put literacy on its development scale as we’ve seen it happen, but on Roshar it takes this weird side route that just seems so wrong. And, interestingly, it’s something that we reject as ridiculous and yet if you look at current trends and developments…well who knows where reading and writing will end up in a century (although probably not divided by gender lines).
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Oh you’re absolutely right about the setup being interesting. When I say “Vorinism disgusts me” it’s because Sanderson has done such a good job of fleshing out the relatively small slice that we’ve seen so far that I can actually see it as a real religion and culture in my mind.
I have no doubt that a cultural setup at least similar to this one could potentially exist in real life. But I would absolutely despise being beholden to it after having lived in my own. Part of that stems from the fact that I am asexual. To tell me I “need” to be attached to someone else in order to somehow be a complete person is a pet peeve I deal with enough in real life (I’m quite happy on my own and do not lack for anything including a healthy social life thank you very much).
To read about a society in which I literally could not function sends chills down my spine. That’s one of the reasons I would like to see at least one or two of the main characters in this series not romantically paired off for a change.
At the moment Jasnah and Kaladin seem like obvious choices for characters Sanderson could keep single and still grow in interesting ways. But I’ve digressed far afield from my original point.
The glyphs as you say are simple words and usually appear alone or in pairs to say “book store” ect. But given their elaborate appearance and the fact that more than one character of both genders have asked “what glyph is that” it seems more likely that they don’t always ‘pop out’ depending on the writer. Adolin is disinterested sure, and maybe a lot of men for exactly the reasons you’ve mentioned.
But I still think one of the reasons so many people just don’t bother is because they aren’t necessarily intuitive depending on who drew it and the context.
@37 wcarter: That’s fair, it’s clear that when you have a fully realized language in women’s script, glyphs are definitely inferior (so if you can get away with it why bother with them).
I can get not liking the way they pair of in couples with strict gender roles: it’s definitely one of the more our-universe-old-fashioned aspects of Alethi culture, and probably a by-product of their fanaticism for battle and the need to keep population numbers up.
And not to go too far afield on your digression (which honestly, those are the most fun) – with as large as a cast as we have, it’ll be interesting to see who might end up happily single. Jasnah definitely seems like a strong candidate, although Kaladin…maybe I’m biased because he has the highest number of legitimate love interests (it may be unfair to just dismiss most of Adolin’s dating before Shallan but it definitely feels like none of those ever had a chance based on context, while Kaladin has not only the moment with Shallan later on but his childhood friend/love interest Laral and Tarah who we know basically nothing of), but he doesn’t strike me as asexual so much as just in a period of his life right now where he needs to get himself together first before going for relationships.
But really, with both Syl and Bridge 4 Kaladin doesn’t need any other major characters, so if it ended up just being that he’d still be happy. So we’ll see what Sanderson cooks up for him down the line I guess.
Szeth might also be happier living single for the rest of his life…of course, right now he has thought for two anyways as he has a certain friend bumping around in his head by the end of this book.
Glyphs are like Chinese calligraphy where the same character can be written in many different styles.
The second line is all different ways to write the character “writing”.
In Heian Japan women wrote in a syllabary while men used Chinese characters. Chinese was a full language, but it does resemble Alethi culture.
The comments on how the different glyphs can be stylized to the point of being nearly unrecognizable is interesting. I can see how many men would be discouraged from learning much more than the few basic more useful glyphs. However, I am somewhat puzzled at a few things concerning men and reading… I seem to recall a scene where a male character, I believe it was Dalinar, hold a book upside down and did not realized he was doing so. This is difficult for me to grasp as little children do figure out which way to hold a book years before they are able to read. In fact, simply by reading to a little child have them figure out very quickly the tiny characters on the page are words. They hardly require any teaching for this and the more precocious of them will figure out how to read on their own….
From what we have seen, little boys are being told stories in the Alethi culture. Surely, they are being read by their mothers… So how is it they don’t figure out by themselves the concept of reading? Why are men completely clueless as to how reading is performed? They do see the written notices, they see the women write, they see the women read, why aren’t they figuring out by themselves? The most curious of men surely should have been able to piece it out…. It is not that hard. Reading is a very basic skill.
To me this is strange.
@36: I too felt the failed glyph reading scene was relevant to Adolin in particular. Sadly, we can’t take Navani’s opinion on the matter as she tends to be rather unjust with these things… just think of how she was bummed neither Adolin nor Dalinar wanted to hear the complex working of the lifting platform, but both focused on what they could do with it… Navani, not everyone wants to know how things work in the details… That being said, I did feel the scene was geared towards Adolin. Clearly, Brandon wanted to show us he can’t read glyph all that well. Why? Why is it relevant Adolin can’t read glyph? I am somewhat wary about Adolin claiming he never saw the use… Adolin does not readily admits many things about himself… so personal questions tend to be responded by already crafted responses. I thus do not have much faith in his response here.
@37: I understand your distress. Based on the context of the Vorin society, I would say a woman is better of staying single than a man… Women don’t need man so to speak, but men do need the women. It is a reverse dependency of the classic world. Women can work as scribes, earn decent wages and do not need to engage themselves in the art of war.
As for a single character, I do believe Jasnah is bond to remain single. There has been people asking Brandon about her sexuality (a substantial part of the fandom has assumed she must be homosexual) to which he had answered he did not plan to broach that subject. However, he did say he would tackle the subject if it ever becomes relevant, but the way it was phrased let me think he currently had no such plans. Therefore, Jasnah should remain single.
As for Kaladin, I do not know. I do think he would be a rather poor boyfriend, so focus he is on his task. I thus do not see him engaging in any long-term relationship involving marriage and eventually children, but this does not exclude other kind of relationships… I thus do not think he would necessarily remain single for the entire duration of the Stormlight Archive. If any male character is set to remain single, I would say Renarin. He is awkward, he is autistic which renders most inter-personal relationship very difficult, by this I do not mean to imply autistic individual are doomed to remain single, simply it would be very hard for him to develop such relations. He has not shown any interest in women (or men or whatever) so far either, so I would take him as a future lonely bachelor over Kaladin.
As for Adolin, let’s just say his character has been built so much around his desire/need to find a wife, not seeing him fulfilling this would be heart-breaking. If anyone needs to marry, it is him. Besides, we need a second generation of characters. The second arc is set to happen in 10 to 15 years from now (in world time), not having any of the main characters having children would be baffling and a tad unrealistic. If anyone is to have children, it is Adolin.
@39 Birgit – I see what you mean. I don’t read or speak Japanese but I’ve been watching anime for so long and of course been playing Final Fantasy so I’m familiar with kanji. I wish I can speak Japanese.
@37 WCarter and @38 FenrirMoridin – Your points are very interesting. And come to think of it, with a warlike people like the Alethi, having a husband and wife team taking care of their battalions/divisions etc. make a lot of sense.
Gepeto, you don’t appear to fully appreciate conditions in the more ancient times in this world or the fictional world of the SA series. Prior to the proliferation of printed matter starting at about the 16th century in Europe, written material was in the form of expensive manuscripts on parchment. Students did not have their own books. At most, the teacher had a manuscript text before him as he taught. Teaching was oral with the lesson reinforced by much verbal repetition by the students. That was also the mode of learning for males in the fictional Alethi culture. It wasn’t just Adolin’s apparent lack of interest, but reading simply wasn’t taught to males and was actively discouraged. Even an eager student such as Kaladin was not taught how to read Alethi script – only glyphs. He needed his mother to read the notes in the illustrated medical books that his father had. Parenthetically, Kaladin was the one who held Shallan’s introductory letter upside down, to her amusement. There were exceptions, of course, such as Amaram, but his abilities in this area was kept hidden. While we may consider such a culture backward, it had the advantage of providing an active role for the literate women, besides the real world traditional roles of child rearing and house keeping. Women played important roles even in the military camps in terms of record keeping, communications via spanreed, couriers, and engineers. Elhokar’s wife ruled Kholinar in his absence. Considering the medieval ambience of the series, it would seem like a more advanced culture – even if overly competitive and militaristic.
I don’t think it’s a given that Kazilah who is mentioned in the epigraph is a “he” instead of a “she”. Or necessarily that the execution-worthy thing they had done was related to the recreance since that doesn’t get mentioned until chapter 38 of the in-world book and this one is from 32. It could be some other bad event not referenced anywhere like a radiant going mad and killing a whole town or something. But I’m curious what would be considered “unwholesome elements” back in that day if it wasn’t during a desolation.
@42: But back in those days, only the few were instructed… Those who showed no promises were quickly send to other tasks. Universities had books, even in medieval times, but only a selected few had access to those. And they had parchment: there was a visual support even if sporadically used. The kids were asked to write. It is not the same as the Alethi…
My entire point is a strictly oral teaching would be difficult for strictly visual children: these would do poorly in such an environment and in a world where only the few are taught… you may not get the many that failed at learning while being taught this way. Even in the early 1900 years, children who did not show interest or talent at school were directed towards other paths and many got out of there barely literate. My own grand-father could not read. He went to school, but he dropped early and he did not learn much. I can’t say why, but my entire point is oral teaching would give poor result on many children.
With their strictly oral teaching, the Alethi are not giving their boys all the chances they need to succeed at learning. The fact many would learn despite this does not eliminate the fact many would fail due to the rigidity of the teaching methods. Adolin may be one of those or maybe not.
What I disagree with is the idea the strictly oral teaching Alethi has with their boys do not encourage some to disengage from their studies due to their hardship in actually learning the stuff…. Visual people don’t learn so well by ear, many don’t learn at all by ear only.
The fact Kaladin (I thought it was Dalinar) held a written text upside down is puzzling… How is it he never figured out which way it went? He has had his nose into books since forever to read those medical terms, even if he was not the one to do the reading, he still saw it..
@44 Gepeto – First, let me say that I am not a teacher and I really don’t have an idea how to teach or how children learn. I don’t know anything about methods of teaching.
That said, at this point in our discussion, it will be good to remind ourselves that there is such as thing as literary license. And this is very true in a fantasy epic like Stormlight Archive wherein the writer (Brandon in this case) builds the world as he imagines it.
So, though you might be scientifically correct in your belief about oral learning vis a vis a visual person, the story is set in a world wherein oral teaching/learning is the norm. And characters have to act within the parameters set by the writer (Brandon) who built that world.
It might not be scientifically correct, but that is the way it is. Hence, if Kaladin don’t know which way is up on a written piece of paper though he has been studying to be a surgeon and had been read the books by his mother, it really does not matter “in world”. That’s just the way it is.
We must also remember that the group here are die hard fans. We read, re-read and discuss every nuance of the book. But, there are many out there who just love to read and enjoy it. But they only read it once. Or listen to it once. The books have to cater to them too. So, if Brandon emphasizes that men can’t read/write while women can by having characters like Adolin and Kaladin act a certain way that does not conform to real world scenarios but within the parameters set in the world of Roshar, then it is alright.
Case in point – it has been established that Kholin men do not have any scholarly bone in their bodies. Jasnah noted that in the biography of her father King Gavilar when she wrote it. Navani even made that observation in her personal journal. Dalinar acts that way towards Navani too. Navani was discussing about her new fabriole and the only thing that Dalinar was interested was if it can be used in battle. Same thing with Adolin. He is always looking for a military use in any new invention.
Renarin might be an exemption. After all, according to Adolin, Renarin really studies the wines and their vintage. Yet, Renarin refuses to be an ardent and trains hard to be a soldier though he has epilepsy.
Other than the fact that they cannot read or write, the Kholin men are actually highly educated. They have had the best tutors that money can buy. Kholinar is a princedom, so they have always been of the First Dahn. In short, they have always had money.
Now, back to earth and the real world. World history was never my forte. What I know are only bits and pieces. From what I remember, @42 STBLST is correct in his comments about oral teaching during the Middle Ages. Perhaps, that was where Brandon based the oral learning tradition in Roshar though he gave it his own twist.
:-)
A couple of things I have to point out:
1) Take a good look at the women’s script on some of the “Navani’s notebook” illustrations. It’s pretty easy to see why Kaladin wouldn’t really be able to tell it was upside down.
2) Take a look at the fashion folio illustrations: there are no glyphs or other text on them, except for Nazh’s notes. There’s no reason to assume that they would have glyphs Adolin can’t read.
@45: I am not a teacher myself, but I have always been interested in learning techniques. Where I live, the school system recently underwent a reform which was controversial and not approved by many. There has been many talks on the subject in the last years. I also happen to have children, so many things I say are based on observations I have made on both of them. I do not typically mention these things as my personal experience hardly constitude a valid argument and very few people would see it as such, but I think getting some background now may help others understand why I have pushed the issue so far.
As for the world itself, I never asked for it to be accurate to this level of details. However, Brandon is not a page-filler. In other words, if he writes a scene, then it has a purpose. Clearly, there was a purpose to Adolin failed attempt at reading glyphs, a purpose not all that clear to me. Somehow, it is important for us, readers, to know Adolin can’t read glyphs. Why? It is not obvious yet. If his goal was to reinforce the fact many men can’t read them, he did not need the Adolin scene… we had Kaladin comment on it earlier on. It tells me there was another purpose to it, but I could also be wrong and there is nothing there at all.
I never argued there was even the spark of scholarship into any of the male characters: there has been no solid evidence of such. However, as I said earlier, I am wary to use Navani comments as a fail-proof argument. It is clear, to me, what Navani considers scholarship is interest in fabrials and their workings. She calls out both Dalinar and Adolin out for not being interested in the detailled working of her fabrial. I would also state there is something about Navani’s entire attitude I cannot quite put my finger on, but it makes me cringe at times. That being said, it is clear both father and son are more interested into direct applications of artifacts as opposed to their creative process.
As for Renarin, we do not know. He has asked questions about a fabrial once and seemed to be the only one interested in it. His family believes he would be happier as an ardent, studying to be an engineer. This is not much to go by, but it has been assumed Renarin was the scholar type across the fandom, which may be a valid assumption, though not one supported by many facts. As for his wine interest, autistic individuals often take deep interest into very specific subjects: for instance one would name all the songs of the Beattles, their release date, their album, etc. The kind of knowledge typical people don’t memorize. Many autistic individuals will also talk at length and in depth of subjects they are interested in without noticing they are going too far for their interlocutor… Sheldon Cooper, for instance, does it rather often. So Renarin knowing all the wines and not being able to shup up about them is not surprising. It tells us nothing about his potential scholarship tendencies: it simply shows one of the numerous quirk of autistic people.
As for the Kholin men, we honestly do not know how much education they received. We are simply making assumptions here. We assumed that by being rich, they would offer their sons good tutors because it does not make sense for us they wouldn’t… but who has tutoring Adolin? Ardent Kadash, a former soldier, not a scholar or perhaps he became one, it is not clear, but it was not a Jasnah-like figure. Adolin also states Kadash tutored as a child… So how old was he exactly when his “formal instruction” was deemed complete? Would Adolin refer to himself as a child at 16? The truth is, we do not know how instructed those boys actually were. All we know, in text, is Adolin received lessons on history, Vorinism and mathematics as he uses percentages in a conversation, which implies some basic knowledge. We do not even know if glyphs reading was part of his basic training package or if it is something he should have pursued on his own. It is not stated. We assume he would have been taught because we can’t imagine he wouldn’t, but we have no evidence on the matter. It could be young men wanting to read glyphs must seek the knowledge by sitting with the Ardents on their own volition, it could be they are not spontaneously taught. Or it could be as I suggested and the way they are being taught makes it harder for some to actually learn with any level of efficiency. Or it could be Adolin was taught but didn’t do the effort to learn much. Education does not seem related to money, look at Kaladin.
Bottom line is the only character we know received higher education is Kaladin. Stating the Kholin boys also received higher education, at this poin in time, is speculation.
@47: Point taken about the folio. The pages shown indeed do not show glyphs. However, it does not mean there isn’t any on other pages, but it could also be there is none. However, we do know the folios are identified by glyphs on the cover page, so there is at least that.
About Kaladin, perhaps it makes sense, but I still have trouble picturing men being clueless to the point of not being able to differentiate upside from downside. I guess it makes sense in their world, but I personally have a hard time processing it.
@47 – Kaladin did not get higher education. He was supposed to go to Kabranth to study/apprentice under the surgeons there. That way he will be qualified as a surgeon. In WoK, Lirin, Kaladin’s father did not study in Kabranth but just apprenticed under a surgeon who studied in Kabranth. As a result, Lirin might be considered a surgeon in a small remote area like Hearthstone, but he is qualified only as a Physician’s Assistant in a big city like Kholinar, the seat of the Kholin princedom.
Kaladin was a surgeon’s assistant. He is an apprentice. The same way that Tien was a carpenter’s apprentice. In Alethkar because it is still an agricultural society albeit a very warlike one, they follow the apprenticeship practice that was prevalent in Europe and Asia (as in China and Japan) during the Middle Ages.
So, if Kaladin did not join Amaram’s army, he would have gone to Kabranth and learned to be a surgeon. That will be “higher education” for him. I’m using the term loosely and I will explain later.
On the other hand, Adolin started learning how to wield a sword before he even reached puberty. Based on what Zahel said, light eyes boys got to him for instruction at 10. But according to Amaram, he has recruits as young as 9.
Adolin also was a spearman as part of his training. It’s because Dalinar wanted him to be well rounded and know all parts of the army. Then of course he chose dueling as part of his study. That is why he is a duelist.
In all of Alethkar, or in parts of Roshar wherein Vorinism prevails, only ardents can “raise” an individual in their chosen field of endeavor. I believe that is what constitutes as education for the Alethi. They don’t have ‘formal’ education the way we view them. They have tutors and “masters” as when they apprentice for a trade.
That said, Adolin is highly educated and probably has a degree from West Point if he is from our world with his knowledge of warfare. Kaladin on the other hand is probably an EMT if he is from our time. If he went to Kabranth, then he will probably have a degree in Medicine equivalent to Harvard Medical School.
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laddybug @43
Good point! One of these days I want to reorder the part 3 epigraphs by chapter and page, then read through them to see if anything relevant stands out.
Wetlandernw @46, #2
I also assumed the annotation was Nazh’s handiwork, even though he didn’t follow his usual m.o. by signing it. The handwriting appears identical to other signed samples. Maybe the “glyph” to the left of the writing points back to him somehow (stylized initials?), but that’s an aside. The point being…why are Nazh and his handler interested in Azish fashion? That type of information seems separate and distinct from the usual info Nazh gathers. I got nutin’.
If it’s an “assumption” that Adolin and /or the other Kohlin men have formal educations than it’s an assumption in the same way I assume the sun will rise in the East tomorrow–overwhelming evidence.
It’s true the Alethi men seem to be primarily taught to hit things, but they have to be taught more than that for the simple reason that they are, by all appearances, the ones actually in charge of the government.
They may be dependent on their female relations to write things down and keep records , but the king and the high princes are the ones that actually make laws, set taxes, set up trade contracts and treaties and in Sebrial’s case run mercantile empires.
Without education, those tasks would never fall to men in a society where women already control as much as they do and where the respect a man can gain actually comes from the ” hitting things” part of their education.
It is technically possible that the women only let the men think they are in charge ( and actually have an all-encompassing shadow government). But we’ve been inside Shallan’s head too many times and have seen too many private conversations between her and Jasnah with absolutely no thoughts in that direction for it to be plausible.
Gepeto @47 – Take a good hard look at this, and then tell me why – short of knowing the structural layout of a spanreed communication, which he’s never had occasion to observe – Kaladin would be able to tell which way was right side up. There’s very little to go on in the script itself; in fact, there is only one set of characters which doesn’t have a symmetrical y-axis counterpart, and they’re all symmetrical around the x-axis.
sheiglagh @48 – Good point about the educational practices. Apprenticeship requires different things for different tasks, and a “surgeon” on Roshar isn’t the same thing as we think of in our 21st-century context. Lirin is a healer, and he’s learned a lot about the insides of people and how to put them back together, but he wouldn’t have a classical or liberal arts education to back that up – just apprenticeship with someone more experienced, and in his case some illustrated books with glyphs to explain the illustrations. Kaladin has about the same thing. And everyone gets more or less the same basic instruction in Vorinism; depending on one’s station, it might tend more towards superstition acquired from folk tales, but the ardents are supposed to come through and teach the approved form as well. (Ardents themselves, of course, are an exception to all of this, but we aren’t discussing the education of ardents.)
In other words, for the vast majority of people, they get the education necessary for the job they’re going to be doing – just like most of our world did, up until the last century or so. Necessary by someone’s standards, anyway… either the parent, the tutor, or the master, depending on the situation.
I’ll refrain from further comment on the glyphs for now; we’ll discuss them somewhat more extensively on Thursday.
Ways @49 – I did that thing with the epigraphs a while back; it’s not a huge thing, but there are a few things that stand out. Like the couple of times when there are two epigraphs from the same page, which definitely ties them together! It’s informative and interesting, in any case, though I can’t recall any great revelations.
As for why Nazh picked these particular items to notate and provide to his “friend” – who knows! Yeah, Azish fashions don’t seem like they ought to be all that significant. From the outside, it’s great, because we get the pictures and some information on them, which is cool world-building. From in-world (or in-Cosmere, really!) it’s hard to guess why anyone like Khriss would care about some of the things Nazh has picked up for her.
@49, The Coppermind has the epigraphs already arranged in order if you are interested.
@48: A few minor points, to study at Karbranth, you needed to be 16 years of age, but you were also required to have apprenticeship prior to applying there. When I said “higher education”, I did not imply University-level education, but elevated education. It is clear, in books, Kaladin has received a more throughout education then most men and whereas he was just “an apprentice”, he is still portrayed as being extremely good.
Adolin started learning how to yield a sword at the age of 6, not 9-10… which indeed seems quite unusual. Renarin implies Adolin was a special case, but I agree that particular passage could be interpreted in various ways. It is clear Adolin received intensive training/tutoring in the manner of leadership, battle tactics, dueling and such, but this is not what I refer to as “higher education”. Higher education has to be broader than *that*. His “general education” seems to have stopped at a young age and it was not throughout.
@50: How is it overwhelming evident the men received such an in-depth education? It seems to me they learn as they go… Dalinar even comments on how unprepared he had been to become a Highprince, but he is teaching his son. However, it is not what I call “formal education”. “Formal education” happens in a “learning environment”, it has “teachers”, “examinations” and it broaches a wider aray of subjects. The lighteyes are certainly more instructed than the darkeyes, but I would not call it “higher education”. By comparison, they appear to do a good job simply because the average population is far less intructed than they are, but they aren’t being taught as well as they should/could. The concept of taxes is extremely old… it has been common practice since medieval times for kings to raise sporadics taxes to pay for their warfare. Most kingdoms of the time were heavily indebt due to their inability to manage properly: merchants were better trained at managing money than kings. Sebrarial also is one example of one very smart Highprince, there are 8 others who could be complete morons as far as we know.
@51: Thank you for educating me in the manner of scripture. I was under the impression is was easier to recognize with side went which way.
@ALL: I do not know what I am supposed to say… I simply have not find enough text evidence to support the claim the Alethi male elite are being instructed as much as they should. For instance, if we look back to Shallan’s flashbacks, it is stated she was supposed to have tutors during her teenage years, but nothing is said of her brothers who are barely older than she. I agree this is not hard-core evidence, but I still find we are missing many pieces in the regard of this specific issue.
I agree they are probably taught as much as they need to, but to me, that constitute the basic minimum and it cannot be considered as part of any “higher education”. I am sure Lirin would be appalled to find out a prince such as Adolin cannot read the most basic glyphs.
Gepeto – I think the problem is that you are defining “formal education” and “higher education” in terms that make sense in our society. Who knows, they might even make sense in some of the western-Roshar cultures. But they don’t mean anything in Alethi culture, and apparently not Veden culture (which we haven’t seen much, outside the Davar household). That’s just not the way education is structured. Even if you’re a woman, or an ardent – both of which are closer to our ideas of education – it might not look the way we expect it to look. If you’re a man, it probably won’t look the way we’d expect.
For that matter, most education on Roshar is up to the parents to direct. The parents may do all of it themselves, a la Kaladin’s family, or they may hire tutors, as the Davar and Kholin families seem to have done. (I suspect this is a fairly general darkeyes/lighteyes split, but I’d bet it’s not 100%, either.) In any case, even then the style of the education will be at the tutor’s discretion. That might mean sitting in a chair, or it might mean lying on the floor, or it might mean wandering around outdoors… You can’t assume that “education” by definition takes place in something we would recognize as a schoolroom, or that it involves sitting at a desk or table even half the time. If you could look in on 100 different home-schooled kids in America, “education” would probably look different for all 100 – even those from the same home. And Alethkar, at least, is essentially all home-schooled, as most people were on our world for their formative years up until the last couple of centuries.
Which… was mostly a long-winded way of saying that I don’t think you can apply our definitions of formal & higher education to Roshar in any meaningful way.
@@@@@ Gepeto I would never claim that the High Princes receive “higher education” just that they are taught more than just warfare. The fact that the concepts of taxation and rule of law are old in no way makes them intuitive to a child.
My best guess (and it’s certainly nothing more than a guess) is an alethi nobleman’s general education probably extends to at or near the equivalent to a modern day middle school level(excepting reading, writing, and creative arts), a woman’s to at or around high school level, and only full surgeons, ardents and actual scholars such as Jasnah to true specialized “university” levels.
On that note, large classrooms and standardized tests do not a formal education make. One on one or one on few tutoring is far more effective. You need look no further than the success of the modern education system in Finland vs the floundering of the system in the U.S. for proof of that.
Eight other high princes that might be morons? Heh, your’re not wrong, but I think it also depends on how you define the term. Given how gun ho they are on endless fighting and backstabbing I would say they’re kinda stupid.
Then again, there somehow is still an Alethkar despite their Machiavellian proclivities, and it is a premier military and economic power on Roshar, so they must be doing something right….
@51 Wetlandernw, thanks for linking to the Coppermind article and graphics of the Vorin women’s script. It is, indeed, symmetrical with respect to the x-axis mirror reflection, but not with regard to inversion (such as holding the page upside down) for most consonants and a few vowels. The inversion in those cases produces a transposition of left and right. However, Kaladin would have needed some familiarity with the phonetic characters to know which way to hold the letter. He is sufficiently curious and analytical to have figured out how to read since his mother read those script notes to him in his medical studies – were it not for the strong Vorin teachings against ‘normal’ males reading. So, he learned to read glyphs but not script. I presume that he would have needed female assistance to read the medical texts in Kharbranth, had he chosen that path in life. Of course, the Ardentia was excluded from such inhibitions. It thus appears to have been a ploy designed to maintain their special status as the educated or literate male class. This scheme of generating illiteracy among non-Ardent males is unlikely to survive in Roshar – assuming that the desolation wrought by the Voidbringers doesn’t set back civilization too seriously. The crack in the literacy scheme is already apparent from the writings of the storm-wardens and Amaram who created their own writing system based on glyph characters. It’s not such a heretical step, then, to go from creating their own script to reading the traditional women’s script.
@54: I do not think you can compare nowadays home-schooled children to home-schooled children of past centuries. Parents who home-school will often do much research to gear their teachings towards their children and no matter which format they adopt, they have thought about it before hands. For instance, where I live, if you want to home-school your child, you still have to furnish the curriculum of your intended teaching for the entire year to ensure the child is properly educated as it is mandatory by law. I’d like to point out I do not live in the US, so I may not know what rules apply there, but I assume it must be similar. Also, nowadays, parents are more aware of different teaching techniques and tend to read more about psychology. In other words, nowadays parents know a lot more about these things than parents did centuries ago. Those who home-school tend to be even more informed because their life choice forces them to stay this way. Now, I would not presume this applies to everyone, but it is a tendency I have observed among other people.
That being said, I doubt Roshar has much experience in terms of child psychology and learning patterns. Whereas one tutor may be more imaginative than another, I expect most of their teachings to be rather traditional. However, there is indeed no evidence of this.
As for “formal” or “higher” education, I guess my main point is I feel any education must be broader than the few requisite fields. For instance, an apprentice will learn his craft/trade and nothing more. I would not call this education, but a formation. Education would be learning about a craft/trade as well as philosophy, literature, history, geography, science and other subject of general interest. Again, I’ll admit this is very modern way of seeing education, but this is what I would expect from it. The wards (and probably the ardents), for instance, appear to do just that.
@55: I have never mentioned large classrooms, I mentioned an environment created for learning which can take plenty of flavors. It is obvious one on one tutoring gives better results, however my point was this tutoring seemed too general and not structured enough. Standardized tests may be badly seen, but for living in a country which eliminated all of them about 15 years ago to put the emphasis on transverse learning , I can tell you we are now back to something closer to the old ways. The new approach did not yield good results and failed on all fronts…….. In history for instance, it is a disaster. We lost ranks in the PISA ranking since then. I have read about Finnish, but it would unbelievably expensive to apply it to my own country and it is not perfect, no system ever is. We have tried to reduce the number of children per class, but the school are not over-crowded and building new schools is hard as nobody wants a school in its backyard. In town, there is just no more space to built new schools. I do not say how many schools we would need to build to go down to Finnish numbers when we struggle to keep the ones we currently have from crumbling under moisture…
Well, we have no solid evidence as to the level of intelligence of the other Highprinces… they could be either genius or morons. It’s entirely possible… All Europeans kings were not all smart, many were pretty dumb and ignorant.
As for Alethkar being a military strength despite not properly schooling its male population? It is easy: they are good at war. They spend a lot of time being good at war. They very knowledgeable in the art of war, so they sit at the top of the food chain. Not all rulers of empires were smart……………….
@Gepeto – why do you say that Kaladin is educated but Adolin is not? Why do you say that Kaladin received higher education but Adolin did not? What is your basis for that conclusion?
i really do not understand why you keep on seeing Adolin as uneducated simply because he looks at fashion books.
Because we do see Kaladin receiving his education in WoK. He learned a lot back then whereas all we see of Adolin is a prince who can’t remember his history lessons and can’t read glyphs. Kaladin can read glyphs and as far as I could tell, he did not have the choice to learn them. Whereas Adolin claimed he never saw the use, so clearly that particular lesson was not reinforced on him: it was not mandatory for him to learn them, whereas it was for Kaladin. Whatever the context or the reasons, the fact remains Kaladin has a great deal more general knowledge than Adolin or he is depicted as having such. This may also simply be a perception, but it seems to me Brandon has put a strong emphasis on Kaladin’s clever upbringing. It is thus my perception Kaladin is more educated than the average lighteyed and he may even be more educated than high ranked ones, though he is clearly lacking in military tactics and battle training.
However, I have never stated Adolin was dumb or unintelligent: I said the contrary (the is enough proof all through the book Adolin’s inner hamster is quite able to make the wheel spin) which is why is apparent lack of dedication in his studies has made me launch the subject. It has nothing to do with the fashion books though… I think you are misunderstanding me. I never stated Adolin was uneducated because he read fashion books (if I said such thing, then I have badly expressed myself, so I apologized, my intentions were different), I said he was uneducated due to his lack of general knowledge. Clearly, he has been allowed not to retain much of his lessons, whatever they may have been and whatever how they may have been conducted. I brought up the fashion mags not because of their subject, but because they were books. I find it amusing the one male character who apparently is the less educated also is the one we often see reading… a book. It does not matter what the book is about, I think I have stated that often enough, it could have been about maps or clouds and I would have had the same commentary. It is just he goes through books, for pleasure which is awesome, not negative. He is the only one we see doing it and yet he is our favorite illiterate prince.
Going through books, even if they are about horses, carts, maps, fashion or any given mundane subjects other than more elevated ones such philosophy or literature, do indicate a certain interest into looking things up. This is exactly how you nurture interest in reading on young children by encouraging them to open up books, no matter what they are about, as long as they go through them. It does not matter either if it is a comic book with few words and large images, it remains a book. So it was meant to be flattering towards Adolin, not negative and it made me questioned the education methodology used to justify why a smart young man interested in looking things up came out apparently so uneducated.
That’s the point I have been trying to make. I fear I may have done a bad job of it as I feel my thoughts are not being interpreted as I thought they would.
@59 Gepeto – What we saw in WoK is Kaladin receiving “apprenticeship” from his father. It is not formal education. Kaladin was following the paternal path. He was being encouraged by his father. But then again, his mother told Kaladin that if he ever goes to Khabranth he does not have to be a surgeon. He can study to be a storm warden, if he wants to.
The relationship between Lirin and Kaladin aside from being father and son is “master and apprentice.” Kaladin is taught glyphs because it is part of being a surgeon. Tien who grew up in the same household but had no stomach to be a surgeon was not taught glyphs.
BTW, remember, we are using the word surgeon here because it is what is being used in the book. But, it is not the same definition as the 21st century surgeons on Earth.
Yes, Kaladin has to wait until his 16th birthday to go to Khabranth and apply for apprenticeship there. And yes, he has to have at least some knowledge of surgery before he goes there. Part of being a surgeon is to be able to read glyphs, so Kaladin was taught to read glyphs. But Kaladin cannot read women’s scripts. And that makes him as illiterate as any other Alethi male.
And BTW, I hate using the word illiterate to describe Alethi men because in my eyes, they are not. They don’t need that skill to read so, they don’t.
As for Adolin, he had education and quite frankly, he had more education than Kaladin. And it’s not because Kaladin is darkeyes. It’s because Kaladin had to join Amaram’s army at 16 instead of going to Khabranth. His education virtually stopped at that point.
It was you who said that Adolin started learning the sword at 6. And that means he is a child prodigy because according to Zahel and Amaram, it’s either 10 or 9 when lighteyes boys start learning the sword. And Adolin has to be good because he won his shard and his horse at 16. And those two are not won easily.
Yes, wielding a sword is a skill and riding a horse is also a skill. But winning a Rhysidium (spelling?) is not a skill. There is investiture there.
To you, it might not be education. But it is! Adolin has to learn sword stances and master them. Even Sadeas who hates Adolin recognized his mastery of the sword.
Then of course, Adolin has to be a spearman and “apprentice” in all the parts of the Kholin army because Dalinar wants to be well rounded when he takes over the Princedom. In fact, in WoK, you can see Dalinar making Adolin do the work like getting reports from the battalion lords, damage reports from storms, etc. All of these are done as part of running a war camp. And if there was no war and they were at home, it is part of running a princedom.
To me, that is education. Adolin does not need to read. He has scribes to read to him. Adolin is a “manager” for lack of a better word. And he is good at it. Even Dalinar recognizes that.
Sidebar – Kaladin in a way also continued his education by mastering the spear after Tien’s death.
As for Adolin not remembering his history, well, it was easy to forget if you are the victor. If it is not a crucial part of how you won something, it goes on the wayside. I believe you were referring to Adolin forgetting about Sadeas dueling someone.
I believe your problem is you did not see Adolin getting his education because it happened off screen. And even if it on screen, there are no lessons being taught. Adolin is just doing it like leading the Kholin Army. It is still Dalinar’s job but Adolin is being pushed to do it because Dalinar was thinking of abdicating at one point in time.
Oh, just to show that Adolin and Renarin “apprentice” as swordsmen. They have to call Zahel “master”. Kaladin and his men tried to call Zahel “master” but Zahel declined saying that he was just helping them out. But Renarin has to call Zahel master because of the relationship they have.
And so that we can put this discussion to rest (the next chapter is another Adolin chapter I think), let us put this discussion in a real world scenario. Here in the U.S., especially here in Texas, people drive. We love to drive. Americans in general have a love affair with the car. At 16 we learn to drive and it is a right of passage.
But, believe it or not, there are many Americans who do not drive or refuse to learn how to drive because there is no need. I see that a lot in New York City. That said, if you tell a New Yorker that a Texan or a Californian is more educated than them because they can drive and New Yorkers don’t, it will be an insult to them. They will be mad!
Driving is a skill! It’s not a degree. In Alethkar, their level of civilization is still on the “skill” level because every desolation, whatever civilization they have is destroyed. Reading is a skill to the Alethi men. To them it not a necessary skill. So, they don’t learn it.
Hopefully, this puts the illiterate prince discussion to rest. I really look forward to the next chapter because Shallan will be there. And we will have all three of them together. And that one I want to discuss.. :-)
Ciao bella!
A few correction, Adolin started training at the age of 6: this was stated in book. I did not make this up, it is a known fact. In the chapter where Jakamav and Adolin attack Parshendis together (around chapter 28-32), Adolin has a conversation with Renarin who, after presumably heard his Blade scream for the first time, froze in battle. Renarin is bummed he does not know more about sword fighting, claimed he should know more and stated out loud Adolin started learning at 6. It is implied he may have been a special case, but it is not confirmed. So yes, Adolin started the sword at the age of 6. We don’t know if it was because he was a prodigy or if Dalinar insisted on it because he was his son or if little Adolin pestered his father until he said yes or because his mother insisted he had something to do instead of being a handful while she dealt with difficult autistic Renarin… We do not know. We can guess, but we have no proof either ways.
Yes Adolin is good, but we have no idea how the famous duel where he won his Blade happened, but we do know everyone took him for a loser. Good or no good, they all thought he would lose, presumably due to his lack of experience and his young age. 16 years old Adolin can’t have been as good as 23 years old one.
Bonding a Rhysadim is not a skill…. you don’t have anything to do.
Adolin and history, again, it is stated in WoK in the chapter where he takes Janala to see ardent Kadash to confide in his worries over his father sanity. It was around chapter 22. Ardent Kadash starts lecturing Adolin in the Hierocracy and he quizzes him, but Adolin is clueless and forced to admit he forgot. He then states how he never had a mind for history not directly related to battles. Kadash questions were very basic stuff, but our favorite prince had forgotten the bulk of it. We also learn, in this chapter, Kadash tutored Adolin as a child (child not teenager though I am unsure if Adolin would make that distinction) which explain why he refers to him as Bright One as opposed to Brightlord. It is thus stated in books how Adolin couldn’t remember his lessons. This also is a known fact and not a fabrication on my part. It is also why I wondered if the teaching method used here and the fact he was not allowed to read his lessons did not play against him.
I have also never stated Adolin was not “educated” in the art of war and leadership: I have stated on numerous occasions he was. All I have been saying is how his “education” was not formal and did not broach a large variety of subjects. In comparison, Kaladin’s “education” (it does not matter how it was conducted, he was educated by his father. It does not matter Tien wasn’t, we are talking about Kaladin here) broached a larger aray of subjects which had the result of making Kaladin more knowledgeable of general stuff.
As for illeterate, I use the term to indicate Adolin cannot read glyphs, not women script. I am sorry if it was confusing.
As for education, I do not consider learning to yield a weapon as “education” just as I do not consider learning how to play football as “education” either. When I use the term education, I refer to academics, not abilities such as sword or spear fighting. Learning how to drive is not an academic pursuit, it merely is a requirement to drive a car. I would not even classify it as a skill, but perhaps it is, this is beyond the point.
I will try again to rephrase what I have been trying to state for several posts.
Kaladin received an “education” more geared towards the academics which englobed a larger variety of subjects. As a result, he is depicted as being more knowledgeable than most characters. The circumstances into which he receives this “education” do not matter, the end result does. Kaladin was also taught to observe, to analyse and to pause a diagnostic. Kaladin sat down every day to do his lessons which is remiscient to our own way of learning.
Adolin, despite being tutored as a child, seem to have retained little of his “academic lessons”, but has learned a lot via his tutoring with Dalinar. However this knowledge is not structured nor organized and does not breach the limit of the strict minimum he needs to know to be a good Highprince. He was basically taught to lead and to manage in a rather informal way. In other words, Adolin learned through experience with Dalinar. As far as we know, he was never given homeworks as opposed to Kaladin who learned by both experience, study and direct teaching which makes up for a more “formal education”.
There is one case where I considered the character received a “more formal education” and the other where I consider the character received a “more informal education”. The result being Kaladin comes across as smarter, by our standards, than Adolin. Now this may not be true, but the story was written in a way to make us readers believe it is the case. Kaladin is hardly ever seen struggling with any subjects linked to academics whereas we see Adolin failing at remembering his past lessons and failing at reading glyphs.
If you go back and read the commentaries on the WoK re-read, you can appreciate how little people thought of Adolin’s mental skills are the time. You can also go browse over Reddit of the 17th Shard to see evidence of the same thing. It is a very common assumption, across the fandom, that Kaladin is the smarter man, an idea I have regularly dispute by stating his “education” was more “academic” and closer to our own perception of “education” which alternatively serves to have us readers see him as superior in that matter, but there is no doubt in my mind Lirin provided a more “solid” education to his son than ardent Kadash to Adolin. Again, we are speaking of “academics” and just “academics”.
Wetlandernw @51 and WW @52
Well, I won’t reinvent the wheel just now by reordering the epigraphs and looking for obscure clues then. If Alice didn’t find them, they probably don’t exist.
Sometimes finding what one is looking for in the Coppermind can be…challenging. It was easy enough to find the epigraphs in the order they are presented (thereby greatly simplifying the task of ordering them “correctly”), but the reordered version wasn’t so obvious on the site (to me anyway).
Kaladin’s education is not broader than Adolin’s. He only learns surgery. The difference is that Kaladin learns from books, while Adolin learns by being given practical tasks by his father. That is not just learning by listening to someone read a text. He might not be interested in that kind of lesson from the ardents (because his culture tells him he shouldn’t be interested and he always acts the way that is expected of him), but he learns many other things through practical exercises, not just fighting, but also managing a princedom and an army. He also learns Dalinar’s moral ideas of how to lead people by example. He doesn’t always understand why Dalinar wants to do things the way he does, but he does listen to him and follow his rules.
birgit @63 – Thanks for making that point so much more concisely than I did! Education looks different in different situations.
In order to avoid reigniting an Adolin vs. Kaladin exchange let me emphasize what I believe they have in common. Both use their fathers as role models, not only for their role in life, but also in their ethical and moral values. Both were regularly given specific tasks by their fathers; Adolin in his military training and Kaladin in his surgical training. Adolin has questioned his father’s judgment concerning the code and the highstorm visions, but came to see them as real and significant. Even Adolin’s difficulty in controlling anger reflects his father’s earlier (pre-assassination) intense personality Kaladin has also questioned his father’s dreams of him becoming a surgeon, and circumstances dictated that he not follow those wishes. Kaladin also had the advantage of benefitting from his mother’s contribution to his intellectual and moral development in that she served as a role model for loyalty and an educated mind. Adolin’s mother and her contribution to his upbringing, however, remains shrouded in mystery due to Dalinar’s induced erasure of her memory (we haven’t yet gotten Adolin’s memory of her). The only brief description of Adolin’s mother was Navani’s remark that she had a sweet personality. The mental differences in the two men may reflect those maternal influences.
Personality wise, one of the major difference from Kaladin and Adolin is the fact the first one not wish to follow into his father’s footsteps and spends his teenage years trying to convince him he wants to… Adolin, on the other hand, wants to follow into his father’s footsteps and finds happiness into being convinced his father was right. Kaladin finds solace into being exactly what his father disapproved of. I am unsure how different this makes them, but I have noted this.
As for Adolin and anger, it is just not anger. We tend to focus on anger, but it is all emotions Adolin struggles to control. His first response to unpredictable situations always is emotional unless he is dwelling into a known environment. He seems to value family and stability. He does not struck me as someone who deals very well with change whereas Kaladin adapts more easily. In fact, part of both books have been about Kaladin adapting itself and Adolin being refracting to changes.
Navani also believes the mother was not smart… she states she was a step from dumb… which I am unsure if true. I agree Adolin seem to have inherit his sweet side from her. I do not know what it means in terms of his education versus Kaladin and his smart witty mother… It could be Kaladin’s tendency to be self-centered sprouted from his upbringing where everything seemed to revolved around him whereas Adolin’s mother raised him to be a polite and carrying boy. I’d be good to get a few perspective on the Kholin mother…
As usual, I continue to differ with Gepeto’s understanding of the personalities of Adolin and Kaladin – particularly, the latter. Kaladin should not be characterized as self-centered given his willingness to sacrifice himself to keep others safe. He has harbored an obsession with revenge against Amaram and an irrational fear that his powers will somehow be taken from him. Those obsessions, however, don’t make him a fully self-centered person, given his feeling of responsibility for the safety and well being of others. He did not rebel against his father’s wishes to have him complete his training as a surgeon. He had mixed feelings about his future. On the one hand, he admired his father’s dedication and nobility, and recognized his developing talents in medicine and surgery. On the other, the Vorin religion taught that the military was the highest calling, and that his one contest using a fighting staff strongly appealed to him. He was prepared, however, to follow his parents plan on going off to Kharbranth to complete his medical training, when his need to protect his kid brother drove him to join Tien in the military. Nor was he entirely satisfied with his evolution as a warrior and commander. His killing of many brave Parshendi in defense of Dalinar’s army greatly disturbed him, and he looked with some longing at some vague thought of leading a field surgery contingent.
Adolin, as Gepeto maintains, is an emotional person with a sunny disposition – when not confronting Sadeas. That sunny disposition – if he can maintain it under changed circumstances, would be a good influence on Shallan – given her traumatic family history. His emotional side may well be modeled after his father’s earlier self as the Blackthorn. While his mother was characterized by Navani as not being overly bright – but sweet, his father is not an intellectual either. He is a commanding figure and a man of action. Those characteristics also served as a model for Adolin. As to adaptation to changing circumstances, Adolin is now being confronted with such radical change while Kaladin has spent much of his young life living under radically different circumstances. We will have to see how Adolin manages those changes.
Self-centered is not the same as selfish… I called Kaladin self-centered due to his tendency to consider all events gravitating around him are about him. It is illustrated in his inability to see the large picture, which has happened several times. His self-centered tendencies have also been made to include those he decided he should protect: his squad, his crew. The greatest example is how he uses the side-carry to protect his own crew without thinking about what it would do to the others: he was being self-centered. He thought of only himself and those he wanted to protect. He does it again with Moash, with his irrational fear Dalinar would steel his powers, with the 4 on 1 duel, with Elhokar… All of these events, Kaladin took and made them about him. Whether they were fueled by revenge or not, the end result is the same: in all occasions he forgot the large picture, he blinded himself to what was at stake in order to favor his own person, his own crew, his own world. I do call this behavior being self-centered, but it is also one Kaladin has worked on for the past two books. I do believe he is getting better at it.
Kaladin has expressed direct desire to become a soldier. I do not recall it ever having anything to do with Vorinism: it was a calling for him and whereas he accepted to follow his father’s path, he would still have preferred to be a soldier. He also mentions how, had Tien been able to be his father’s apprentice, he would have left with the army. Moreover, after being freed by Dalinar, he does not ask to go back to his studies as he is content in being a soldier. I completely disagree becoming a surgeon was Kaladin’s choice: it was his father’s choice which he came to consider his. Future events have shown us how wrong that was.
I see a great difference between the Kaladin/Lirin and the Adolin/Dalinar relationship.
Adolin and Dalinar have a similar personality type which makes them prompt to react with emotions as opposed to with thoughts. If Dalinar has managed to completely quell this side of him, Adolin has not even begun to understand he is behaving that way.
As for changes, Kaladin has always been easy to adapt and drastic changes did not put him in a state of nervousness nor stress. We see Adolin get nervous each time he feels things are about to change. Their reactions to change widely differ and I do not think it has to do with Kaladin having lived more changes. Some people just value stability and routine more than others. I believe Adolin to be one of such.